Wine and Grapes

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Wine and grapes. Lightwave, rendered in fprime, grade in photoshop.

[LukeZ]

greate work ! i love it
nice ps post work, nice looking scene & object i like glass material :] and this all on good old fprime ;p 5s
cheers !
ps do wyou have bigger resolution ?

[ArtGoblin]

I love it ! You've done an exceptionally good job with the lighting and textures there

5 stars from me on this one

[Cesar Montero]

I love everything but the grapes. I love the crystal, the wine, the backdrop, the shading, the lighting, the concept...just those grapes need some polishing:

The grapes look a bit like "polished potatoes"...In other words, the skin looks to tick, not allowing light to get in and be shown on tbe back of them. Such a sharp and intense light on the left would cause such effect, and perhaps a more intense "frenel".

Take a pic of grapes being side-light, and see the result. Most probably you'll get some light being filtered the same way as light trough your fingers on top of a lamp.

Otherwise, its a great piece, I love..totally love that glass of wine...the mantle..wow, nice!..

[zardoz]

yep, everything looks great except the grapes. add some sss to them.

[2create]

Thanks guys.

Will definitely add some sss to the grapes and see if I can get them better, they've been called "mini sausages" on deviantart too . Might try putting some cheese in there too.

[richdj]

Excellent work.. love to see the update on the grapes...

Rich

[Cesar Montero]

sausages..cheese...grapes...mmmmm!
You are making me hungry!
:P

I really like this one.
I will be checking out for updates!
=)

[aurora]

Gotta agree with the grapes. Actually the best solution to this is to add a little SSS to them and voila fantastic grapes and a near perfect project!

My only other issue deals with doing something in post. Namely try creating a tonal gradient to mix into your image such that its a little dark on the image and a little lighter in the center then draw that gradient from left to right only at a slight angle from top to bottom, not much but a bit to align it with the light source. In the end that should give you more punch on the subjects and more mood to the background.

[pablogrca]

Nice work, I'll have to agree about the grapes but the glass and comp are excellent.

[andrew06]

Fantastic! Your works are very good!

[tobian]

Great stuff! Yeah they could use more SSS and maybe a little more shine too. Perhaps crank up the luminosity of the windows/outside the windows, to make them punch through the reflections a little more?

Love the post effect too, does look like an old master!

[Larry_g1s]

Amazing work, top notch. My only suggestion would be some SSS on the grapes to give that slight layer of translucency. Solid work though.

[2create]

Thanks for the feedback all. I've updated the grapes and added a candle.

[Cesar Montero]

Uhm...I like it more without the candle! :P
Personal taste perhaps!
But I love the new grapes!
They are no more sausages!
Excellent!